Death Tunnel – DivX Version (Normal Quality), iPod/iPhone Version
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IMDB rating: 2.70 Plot: Movie is based on the True Stories and Hauntings of Waverly Hills Sanatorium in Louisville, Kentucky. This horrific Five story structure is listed as one of the Top Ten Scariest Places on Earth, due to the 63,000+ deaths within this monument of Terror. They were then carried through the massive Five hundred foot underground Tunnel to their final resting place. The story involves Five girls on a college initiation, dared to spend the night separately on the Five floors of this sanatorium, with the Five ghosts that exist within it’s abandoned corridors. Will they make it through the night? For the only way out is through…the Death Tunnel. |
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Actors: Lasater Jason,Wolf Gary,Gayle Gill,Dyer Brian,Ghai Jilon,Bernstein Jesse,Harr Jr. George W.,Winslow B.J.,Horror,
what do you think of my poems?
steal them and i’ll sue you’re ass…understand? =)
kay…i’m 15..and i know it’s not very good but yeah…
Now, the fever of life has fallen on her,
the hearts of the reckless can never be cured,
eternity ignores the cries of its beauty,
falling,falling deep in the tears of there mind,
she stares at a wall unaware of the feelings,
placebo,never was she real,
empty bottle. trapped, locked inside,
she’d rather draw blood then touch his numb thoughts,
sustain this pain with grace in you’re cold eyes,
Alone she sheds this velvet rust,
a robust animal.
death is but hope in her empty mind,
isolated. she acknowledged what she is believed to be,
a psychedelic beat shot into her veins,
barely consious,she sheds one last tear in this river of nothing,
a lonely being pushing away the surreal,
one night stands,nothing more,
craving what she can never be,
her memories infest,tired of being passed around,
she lay there cold,lifeless,
The impact of this ebony fall,
She will awake once more,
and the rain will fall…just for her.
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second poem
BEAWARE THIS IS A DIFFERENT POEM;;
Yesterday’s Past
The lyrics of envy roll off her lips
and the vanity seeps through her
teeth in a smile where happiness can’t exist
The invisible flys buzz around her bloodshot eyes,
the men that were never gone.
The candle burned out in search of the sky,
and the imortal left behind a devious lie,
the bread goes stale as the days fly back to the past
and the skeletal friends decide to leave life.
She cried in a bowl after a feast for a king
and began that night before she met them.
Follow the light of his never ending tunnel,
no trace of blood on his flickering spark,
her wings jammed together, scared of the dark,
her life will sprout this time of year.
Bare back, the holy book fills with a twisted laugh,
And the hero fades,
and the nonsense disappears,
when the flies aren’t here,
how can we tell whats real?
Pixies clasp ear and ear,
They knew nothing beyond dim lights,
They hide in a corner rocking back and forth,
watching the spiders choose their prey,
and the cannibal couch,
just the end of today’s tomorrow night
i dunno…sorry if there bad,or wrong spelling i havent wrote poems be4 im not that talented…
and don’t steal or i will sue you..but i spose who would want to steal the there crap..thanks for you’re time!=D
First fo all quit plugging yer questions when you answer other peoples questions LOL.
Secondly it is not bad at all for a 15 year old. I actually enjoyed reading it, however I have a few thoughts for you as I am not entirely sure what you are trying to convey, allthough the words played strongly on my emotions.
What exactly is the thought you are trying to convey?
How does each line bear upon that thought? That theme?
Some of your imagery, is in my mind, a little disjointed.
Re-write it. Weed out the sentences that do not develop your thought and try and maintain a coherant pattern of thought in addition to the emotional element.
Ask yourself what you want the reader to think? To feel?
- tony
Anthony | Nov 02, 2009